Subject: Post Your Poetry Tue Apr 26, 2011 4:42 pm
Something I wrote years ago in high school. It's in free style. Yes, it is about a monstrous bass
Paragon of Power
Flashing green and mottled beige Waters dark with algae prized Jaws of iron and crushing power A flick of fin and fortitude Silent waiting not scorned Patience rewarded, hunger appealed Roving eyes of acute persistence Effortless gliding through waters dim Prey engulfed in sudden diatribe Territory secured through vigilance Cavernous gullet seizing sustenance
Tok'Rah Admin
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Subject: Re: Post Your Poetry Tue Apr 26, 2011 4:43 pm
Wow nice man. Haha I had to look up some of those words.
lecrae
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Subject: Re: Post Your Poetry Tue Apr 26, 2011 4:56 pm
Tok'Rah wrote:
Wow nice man. Haha I had to look up some of those words.
You have a small vocabulary lol
Weird, I swear I had some finished work saved here, but It's no where to be seen
Tok'Rah Admin
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Subject: Re: Post Your Poetry Tue Apr 26, 2011 5:00 pm
Haha indeed I do.
Did you post them on the forums? because I haven't seen anything yet.
lecrae
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Subject: Re: Post Your Poetry Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:43 pm
Oh no, I was referring to the fact that I thought I had some saved on my computer
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Subject: Re: Post Your Poetry Wed Apr 27, 2011 9:08 am
Not bad very good
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Subject: Re: Post Your Poetry Fri Jul 08, 2011 6:00 pm
Dead and the Others
Dead he is inside a corpse of his once youthful and happy life.
Love is not without the end a pain none can comprehend.
She is gone from love and with her so is he she moves on from love but he can not see end.
Love is not without the end a pain no one can comprehend. My pain which never ends.
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